Status Updates From Murder Mansion (The Painted...

Well that was a quick DNF. The writing style is just too rough. Not offensively bad, but impossible to get past the bumps and jolts to enjoy any story that might be lurking. Per Amazon, husband in this writing team is the "grammar hammer.". A Nerf one maybe. Desperately needs editing. Desperately.

For the love of Guttenberg, learn how to use pronouns. I'm already tired of trying to figure out the antecedents . . . and usually failing.