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Midniteillusion
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An awful lot of telling vs showing. Just kind of rambmig thoughts in his head.
— Nov 18, 2023 01:01AM
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Gemma
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“Fitz watched as Lady Raynecourt drug the enchanting young woman across the ballroom.”
Drug? Really? Shouldn’t that be “dragged”? This is an historical romance, I highly doubt the hero would be thinking in modern slang.
— Nov 21, 2018 08:19PM
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Drug? Really? Shouldn’t that be “dragged”? This is an historical romance, I highly doubt the hero would be thinking in modern slang.







