Status Updates From Aloha, Baby! (Escape #0.5)

of 83 pages

It's not bad, I guess. Hawaiian girl falls for a creep from the mainland. Creep leaves and wants nothing to do with her or her baby-to-be. Big teddy bear of a friend wants to raise the kid with her. Pretty predictable, but overall decent; Leilani is a likeable (albeit naive) character. I think I know how it will end, but I'll keep reading to see if I'm right.