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Lindsay
is on page 52 of 296
DNF At page 52. Can’t do it. The writing is so bland and awkwardly self conscious. It reminded me of a high schooler taking their first ever stab at fiction but having no idea how to go about it.
— Jul 14, 2018 07:29PM
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Jessica Jesinghaus
is finished
??? What just happened? That was the ending?
— Oct 27, 2016 10:56PM
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Jessica Jesinghaus
is 54% done
Liking the story concept and the descriptions / narrative is good. But the dialogue! Stilted and stiff, doesn't feel at all like he way people talk :(
— Oct 26, 2016 06:27AM
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