Status Updates From Survival Short Stories

This has been one of the worst things I've ever tried to read. From the duetoromney like descriptions of characters on the second page, to the constant need to use brand names and detailed weapons descriptions (why say m16a2 5.56mm rifle instead of just m16? Or just rifle)To horrendous editing (what's a teen ager?)

A complex list of characters that are straight boring as cardboard. Lord help me as I push through.