Status Updates From The Sword of Life (Chronicl...

The one problem is the plotting: so far it's been erratic and random. Frex, there's a scene where one of the heroes meets a mage for help and gets attacked by assassins for no good reason and then he finds out the mage is actually a vampire, all in the space of a few paragraphs. This threw me off, mainly because it was over before anything has sunk in. For the Dragon Warriors RPG's sake, I really want to like this.