Status Updates From Paige's Warriors (Bondmates...

“He’d had her hymen taken care of during her time with the Healers earlier so she would not feel pain right now.”

I hate this - there was no point in making her a virgin if you’re going to rob the scene of all authenticity at your convenience.

I’m so disgruntled by all this OOC behaviour and the impromptu growth spurt that I’m at the first love scene and i’m actually turned off by it - I want to stop reading the book entirely. Also it’s a horrid practice for us to be past the 70% mark and she still hasn’t met the second guy; their relationship’s formation can only be rushed.

I really hate that they made her undergo a medical procedure to make her 5’10” - I liked that she’d been 5’0”. The excuse is because she’ll have to stretch a lot to take him and will only be able to take him halfway, but the vaginal canal is designed to stretch for babies - this is no excuse. And I don’t see why it’s such a travesty for her not to take all of him anyway; if some is left out, get creative.

A couple things I don’t appreciate so far:
- grammatical issues
- Paige’s behaviour isn’t consistent at all; as soon as she gets on the ship and gets medical enhancements she’s suddenly this confident, demanding, raunchy love kitten, which is not the characterization I signed up for or the girl I started this novel with

“Flapping her hand at Paige, Dawn pouted. “Whatever. You’re so dramatic. Have I ever gotten into an accident with you in the car?”

“No, but you’ve gotten into four of them without me.”

Ha!

Team had Paige's hymen "taken care of" while she was with healers so she'd not feel pain... Ok that's wired but totally thoughtful. He gets kudos for that

Team had Paige's hymen "taken care of" while she was with healers so she'd not feel pain... Ok that's wired but totally thoughtful. He gets kudos for that

Oh boy she's a virgin.

Dat dreaming about her & her grown friends dressing like princesses *rolling my eyes

Everything about Paige is so Mary-Sue in an emotionally damaged way. Yawn. Lol

Lmao dawn is so right Paige is a fucking bore!!! Snooze

Lucious Malfoy really I guess if that look's attractive to Paige go for it I guess. Into just ewww not my cup a ...

Wtf she lives in her own apartment but has a princess room?! Pink walls & princess bedding WTfuckity fuck?! She a university student!!! It's just wrong so wrong!!!

Paige the undo student has a diary? Isn't she too old for that I mean she is in her early twenties right?