Giselle’s Reviews > Paige's Warriors > Status Update

“He’d had her hymen taken care of during her time with the Healers earlier so she would not feel pain right now.”

I hate this - there was no point in making her a virgin if you’re going to rob the scene of all authenticity at your convenience.

I really hate that they made her undergo a medical procedure to make her 5’10” - I liked that she’d been 5’0”. The excuse is because she’ll have to stretch a lot to take him and will only be able to take him halfway, but the vaginal canal is designed to stretch for babies - this is no excuse. And I don’t see why it’s such a travesty for her not to take all of him anyway; if some is left out, get creative.

A couple things I don’t appreciate so far:
- grammatical issues
- Paige’s behaviour isn’t consistent at all; as soon as she gets on the ship and gets medical enhancements she’s suddenly this confident, demanding, raunchy love kitten, which is not the characterization I signed up for or the girl I started this novel with

“Flapping her hand at Paige, Dawn pouted. “Whatever. You’re so dramatic. Have I ever gotten into an accident with you in the car?”

“No, but you’ve gotten into four of them without me.”

Ha!