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Maybe some more stringent editing would have helped? Often the author will use a huge run-on sentence when a little rephrasing would have said the same thing and been less annoying to read. (Page one of book one had thirty-one commas, it's gotten better, but still so many!)

Dierdre is ruining it for me. Since she split from Kyra; her scenes have felt boring & cliche.

However, this is a series that always felt "almost there, almost good" to me. I kept reading out of hope that it would finally click into place & be amazing, but so far it hasn't happened. I'm starting to think it will always be so. Unless the remaining portion improves & finally pulls me in, I won't be getting book 4.

I like it better that the first book so far.