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Laura
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I feel like she is flying through everything rather than having it develop. The story will lead up to a topic then ends the chapter. The next chapter starts by looking back to what happened and summarizes it. it "tells" us what happened rather than showing us what happens. I am not a fan of this writing style. We'll see how she makes 4 books out of this, even if they are novellas.
— Sep 26, 2016 12:46PM
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