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Surely here

"John's touching the white sheet. I can see the outline of a face, nose sticking out. Further down , shoulder blades before the sheet becomes thicker and turns into a thick shroud."

it should be collar bones not shoulder blades? your shoulder blades are on your back?? (sorry it's been bugging me since I reread it) The body is in a morgue so it would be on its back wouldn't it?

Still glued....got a bit weepy reading it in bed last night! Not sure I'm liking the way it's turned....

Page turner! Some discrepencies and bits of, imo, unnecessary repetition, but on the whole a really good read and a gripping story so far...

I like this so far, the two halves of the storey fit together and complement each other well so far. However, did anyone actually proof read this book before it was released? I have the kindle version and the number of grammar errors and missing/ incorrect words is unbelievable!