Status Updates From Taken by His Best Friend

Hmmmm…… Not sure what to feel about this.

The sudden mood shift is so strange. Almost as if two different people wrote the first and second half. It’s alienating. 😧

This was doing so well up until the jarring middle-of-the-narrative shift in POV that just deflated all the carefully built up tension as anti-climactically as a callously popped balloon. The top suddenly turned into a stereotypical cookie-cutter anime seme who’s sexually assertive yet as passionless and bland as a wind-up sex doll. No, no, no. WHY…?? 🥲 Why’d the bottom turn into a wuss too all of a sudden??