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E is 60% done
This was doing so well up until the jarring middle-of-the-narrative shift in POV that just deflated all the carefully built up tension as anti-climactically as a callously popped balloon. The top suddenly turned into a stereotypical cookie-cutter anime seme who’s sexually assertive yet as passionless and bland as a wind-up sex doll. No, no, no. WHY…?? 🥲 Why’d the bottom turn into a wuss too all of a sudden??
Dec 01, 2023 03:12AM
Taken by His Best Friend

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E is finished
Hmmmm…… Not sure what to feel about this.
Dec 01, 2023 04:57AM
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E is 65% done
The sudden mood shift is so strange. Almost as if two different people wrote the first and second half. It’s alienating. 😧
Dec 01, 2023 04:10AM
Taken by His Best Friend


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E is 25% done
Dec 01, 2023 01:54AM
Taken by His Best Friend


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E is starting
Dec 01, 2023 01:54AM
Taken by His Best Friend


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