Status Updates From Michael's Heart (Pack Mates...

There used to be a time when I found clothes tearing in sex scenes hot as hell, but now I'm just all "OMG, what if that was their favourite shirt, you asshole!!"

I finally found a copy of this book and I'm all ready for a night in with me and my Smooth Rock Falls men. Let's do it!

Continuous errors... "...watching Michael him again a third time".... Except for the errors I love this but DAMN!

"The way you two were looking at each other over at dinner the other night..." Damn! A good editor should have caught this obvious time line mistake... At the minimum we know it's been at least 6 weeks since that dinner. Maybe longer but from time jumps that we've been told we know it's at least six weeks. *sigh*

Say what?! A "shifter negotiator" has a human secretary?! How? Why? That makes no sense. It'd be impossible to keep her in the dark about shifters since they're his job! *sigh*

Damn!! Does this author have no editorial support?! Ing instead of Ed.... Then Ed instead of ing... !! All of the mistakes are killing me!!! Without the mistakes I would be absolutely loving this book!

"Pulled out the cell out of it's case"

"On a whim he'd sent a text to Michael on the pretext of needed to change..." Sigh... Distracts the hell out of me!

While I love this series I sure wish someone would proofread it better... Or at all. "Normally, he care much for small talk.".... Ummm missing a word here! Sadly this is riddled with missing or wrong words.

this is getting horribly hard to finish

Not a good sign I am hoping this ends. Soon.... Such an unappealing main character. I understand his background, but so tiresome.

It's a bad sign that I want to read about the Tigers rather than this story. Right?

2.5*