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Pati
is 51% done
Damn!! Does this author have no editorial support?! Ing instead of Ed.... Then Ed instead of ing... !! All of the mistakes are killing me!!! Without the mistakes I would be absolutely loving this book!
— Sep 03, 2015 08:14AM
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Pati
is 87% done
Continuous errors... "...watching Michael him again a third time".... Except for the errors I love this but DAMN!
— Sep 03, 2015 11:54AM
Pati
is 56% done
"The way you two were looking at each other over at dinner the other night..." Damn! A good editor should have caught this obvious time line mistake... At the minimum we know it's been at least 6 weeks since that dinner. Maybe longer but from time jumps that we've been told we know it's at least six weeks. *sigh*
— Sep 03, 2015 08:35AM
Pati
is 51% done
Say what?! A "shifter negotiator" has a human secretary?! How? Why? That makes no sense. It'd be impossible to keep her in the dark about shifters since they're his job! *sigh*
— Sep 03, 2015 08:19AM
Pati
is 27% done
"On a whim he'd sent a text to Michael on the pretext of needed to change..." Sigh... Distracts the hell out of me!
— Sep 03, 2015 06:39AM
Pati
is 27% done
While I love this series I sure wish someone would proofread it better... Or at all. "Normally, he care much for small talk.".... Ummm missing a word here! Sadly this is riddled with missing or wrong words.
— Sep 03, 2015 06:36AM
