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Maca
is on page 236
ive already read this book twice when it was just up on wattpad. I love the start of it until they get into the vacation part and its just messy and they seem to really lack the growth and maturity.. I hate the part thats coming up tho, its just so stupid and unnecessary...
— Aug 21, 2024 04:11AM
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Jade☕️
is 85% done
All I can think about is that Mr. is a nice asshole, and Mrs. is fucking ignorant
— Sep 14, 2021 12:21AM
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Charlotte_xx
is 70% done
It has the promise of a brilliant book.
I find the flow of the story is very choppy, one paragraph their fighting, the next it's two weeks later.
In need of a good edit, some spelling and grammar mistakes, more structure in some sentences.
The story itself is good, however, 70% in and I feel like it's starting to drag.
Update when finished.
— Feb 26, 2019 02:52PM
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I find the flow of the story is very choppy, one paragraph their fighting, the next it's two weeks later.
In need of a good edit, some spelling and grammar mistakes, more structure in some sentences.
The story itself is good, however, 70% in and I feel like it's starting to drag.
Update when finished.
Shirley
is on page 71
gosh it's angsty right from the start, i feel emotional reading it.
— Oct 20, 2017 12:35AM
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