Status Updates From Forgotten Sweethearts

ive already read this book twice when it was just up on wattpad. I love the start of it until they get into the vacation part and its just messy and they seem to really lack the growth and maturity.. I hate the part thats coming up tho, its just so stupid and unnecessary...

All I can think about is that Mr. is a nice asshole, and Mrs. is fucking ignorant

It has the promise of a brilliant book.
I find the flow of the story is very choppy, one paragraph their fighting, the next it's two weeks later.
In need of a good edit, some spelling and grammar mistakes, more structure in some sentences.
The story itself is good, however, 70% in and I feel like it's starting to drag.
Update when finished.

gosh it's angsty right from the start, i feel emotional reading it.