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Good book but there were some factors that made it inconsistent: a) all the POVs were not balanced b) the language in places felt like it was trying too hard to be archaic (this could be my own deficiency too) c) the ending was extremely rushed.
The inconsistent pacing and lack of clarity on what was being conveyed in some places hampered the quality of the work imo.
— Nov 12, 2024 03:36AM
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The inconsistent pacing and lack of clarity on what was being conveyed in some places hampered the quality of the work imo.








