Status Updates From The Terms: Part One (The Te...

Ssoooooo goooooooodddd

Writing is very poor, overly simplistic.

Okay, the premise here is right up my alley, but there's no...spark, no...connection between the characters. The words on the page say there is, but it's just not there. This is a telling, not a showing.

Ok I’m going to admit when I saw DOM & SUB I considered this a no, but an Instagram friend kept raving about it... so I figured I’d try. And Christ it is so good so far. The DOM sub could still ruin it for me but hasn’t yet.

There has to be some code that brothers don't hook up with the same girl...right? Poor Camilla did them wrong, but every guy is smitten for a blond cutie. The one hiccup is that Tony is dead and Ellis is going to be blindsided, but not too sure as to why things are not as clear as day to him AND there are way to many secrets!
Super easy read, done in 5 hours, had me up all night. Ready for part 2...

This is terrible. It sounded like the kind of dark romance I love but the writing is awful and the dialogue makes me cringe. DNF.