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Chapparita
is on page 128 of 280
The plot interests me as does the male main character, but the writing is really starting to grate. There's this element of forced poetry in the style and tone. It isn't value added. It complicates the scenes to the extent that the story loses clarity - are they having sex or not, is she daydreaming or not, etc. It unnecessarily drags out the scenes, but without moving the plot forward.
— Dec 23, 2025 09:29PM
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Bethany
is on page 64 of 280
DNF-- perfect opportunity for both, romance and action. Yet it's nothing but straight up porn with a side of "who cares if she wants it, it's making me feel better about myself" Only one in the series so far I couldn't finish. No story of any kind, just one electric blue f$@k after another
— Aug 29, 2025 08:39PM
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Amy
is on page 165 of 280
One detail driving me nuts: “I feel like I’m waking up from novocaine.” Obviously, this author has never used novocaine at the dentist for dental procedures. You don’t “wake up” from novocaine because it’s only a local anesthetic used for numbing the gums. It’s not for putting you to sleep!!!
— Mar 02, 2021 08:53PM
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