Chapparita’s Reviews > Misadventures with a Super Hero > Status Update

The plot interests me as does the male main character, but the writing is really starting to grate. There's this element of forced poetry in the style and tone. It isn't value added. It complicates the scenes to the extent that the story loses clarity - are they having sex or not, is she daydreaming or not, etc. It unnecessarily drags out the scenes, but without moving the plot forward.