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Mike
is 11% done
Very slow-moving, wordy, unnecessarily out of chronological order, with an unpromising protagonist. Also, a literary reference that is anachronistic by 50 years (since Peter Pan is Edwardian, not Victorian). Needs about 20% more commas.
Considering a DNF on this one.
— Nov 27, 2019 04:10PM
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Considering a DNF on this one.
M. Jones
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Still too concussed to read for any length of time. Hope to be back to this (and everything else I can't currently do!) soon.
— Jul 18, 2018 03:07AM
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