Mike’s Reviews > A Curiosity of the Solar System > Status Update
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is 11% done
Very slow-moving, wordy, unnecessarily out of chronological order, with an unpromising protagonist. Also, a literary reference that is anachronistic by 50 years (since Peter Pan is Edwardian, not Victorian). Needs about 20% more commas.
Considering a DNF on this one.
— Nov 27, 2019 04:10PM
Considering a DNF on this one.
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