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The writing is just... My head hurts

You don't place an add saying you'll pay 5000 $ for a date,
you place an add saying you're willing to go on dates for 5000$, not the other way around

“My father is being sued, and not just the little kind.
He’s losing everything, meaning my education is going to
be put on hold. I don’t mind giving up my apartment and
all my belongings, but I can’t just quit school.” I sighed,
my eyes lifting to the sky.

"The little way"?
She'll rather live naked on the street than quit school?
If he can't pay for your education you're gonna have to quit.
JFC

“I’m screwed Zoey, and not even in the good
way.” I pouted, nibbling on my straw.


Well, since Stephenie is supposed to be a virgin she has NEVER been screwed 'the good way'

The phone rang, and rang, and rang and just when I
thought she was going to send me to voicemail her over
joyful voice filtered into the speaker of the phone.


*cringe*

"He was the
owner and CEO of a company that sold printers, that is
until one of the printers was apparently defective and
exploded. This little mishap caused severe burns to a
customer’s face when she was trying to change"

Umm.. *raises hand* it would be the manufacturer, not the retailer who was sued... Just saying

First of all, the first sentence is 45!!!! words and no full stop in sight.

Jeeze

short story finished at 56%...thought I was buying a 200 page book...as usual an author 'forgets' to mention this fact...would not have bought if I had known beforehand