Status Updates From Game of the Gods

"You've got a deal, Judge," Dang says. He reaches his hand up toward mine. I go to shake it, but then I realize he isn't reaching for my hand. He's reaching for the book.

- Hey, one of the characters just unexpectedly got way more interesting!!

This SF dystopian novel started out pretty strong (notwithstanding the first person present tense narrative) but started unraveling for me about a third of the way in, and right I'm barely interested enough to finish. VERY choppy. Some good ideas but Jay Shiffman doesn't have the writing skills yet to make it all work.

so boring