Status Updates From Jérusalem

I'm so glad that part two is over. Hopefully part three returns to the vignette structure of the first part, which is much less frustrating.

The plot holes resulting from the time-travel angle are becoming too numerous to avoid.
Also, the treatment of madness seems to be a bit childish, especially so when dealing with Moore's real-life muses.

I'm growing very tired of exposition awkwardly brought about through the dialogue of children. Moore very clearly wants his reader to know every little detail of the world he has created, but doesn't know how to bring it about naturally, which makes for an exhausting read. The overwhelming detail is also exhaustive, yet rarely illuminating. What Moore needs is a good, thorough editor.

God, part 2 is dragging.

This is very well written and shows clear sympathy, or even compassion, for the most vulnerable denizens of our society. At the point, I have gotten to those with psychiatric problems and down-on-their-luck addicts. I enjoyed the unfolding of the higher-dimensional speech of what appear to be angels. I have to say, though, Moore takes a long time to get where he's going. I've no idea where that will be...