Status Updates From Madd Ink

For the love of all that's holy ... now they have piercings? No mention of obtaining them, but they weren't mentioned in the first steamy scene. Ugh.

Sweet baby cheeses. They're having unprotected sex?! She has to be the stupidest single mother on the planet! Seriously considering abandoning this travesty.

She wants to protect her heart and her daughter, and yet she's just told her daughter that the strange man who just called for the first time might be her boyfriend?! AW HELL NAW!

Could have used another pass by an editor if there was one. Ryn is told to expect another customer but she acts like she's surprised when Slade shows up.

Slade has seen Ryn a few times at the parlor, so why has he decided now that he has to have her.

Practically the first sentences of the story are about how much he likes to fuck different women, now suddenly it's "not as many as you'd think I have"? What?