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Lara
is 32% done
Could have used another pass by an editor if there was one. Ryn is told to expect another customer but she acts like she's surprised when Slade shows up.
Slade has seen Ryn a few times at the parlor, so why has he decided now that he has to have her.
Practically the first sentences of the story are about how much he likes to fuck different women, now suddenly it's "not as many as you'd think I have"? What?
— Jul 22, 2019 03:12PM
Slade has seen Ryn a few times at the parlor, so why has he decided now that he has to have her.
Practically the first sentences of the story are about how much he likes to fuck different women, now suddenly it's "not as many as you'd think I have"? What?
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Lara
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For the love of all that's holy ... now they have piercings? No mention of obtaining them, but they weren't mentioned in the first steamy scene. Ugh.
— Aug 05, 2019 11:45PM
Lara
is 62% done
Sweet baby cheeses. They're having unprotected sex?! She has to be the stupidest single mother on the planet! Seriously considering abandoning this travesty.
— Aug 05, 2019 11:27PM
Lara
is 37% done
She wants to protect her heart and her daughter, and yet she's just told her daughter that the strange man who just called for the first time might be her boyfriend?! AW HELL NAW!
— Jul 22, 2019 03:22PM
