Status Updates From Mr Darcy's Dryad

I have been reading this. Yes, the punctuation and sentence structure do leave a lot to be desired, but so far the story is well thought out and great for both Fitzwilliam Darcy and his cousin, Col. Richard Fitzwilliam. There are sentence fragments, lack of commas or periods that may distract, and cover up a really good story and a wonderful developing relationship between Lizzy and Mr. Darcy early in the book.

Not the words but the punctuation -- or lack thereof.
Very hard to read.

So sad to miss the 3rd grade education.