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Mar 28, 2018 02:00PM
I have this on my Amazon wish-list. I look forward to hearing your thoughts as to whether I will add it to my GR 'Want to Read' bookshelf or not.
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No. Skip this. First off you are immediately struck by how poor the writing is: run-on sentences (2 and 3 together), non-existent punctuation, misspellings, etc. I know 5th graders who can edit this book better. I doubt there was any editor. I like to finish what I start but I find myself pausing to play Free Cell on my computer or a chore to do. I just stopped to make Cheeseburger Soup. There has been one misunderstanding but it is one we have read of over and over again. Collins tells Lizzie the Darcy is engaged to Anne. Plus Caroline and Wickham hatch an evil plan which is foiled and we find her foaming at the mouth...literally. I am within 26% of the ending and will hang in there. I want to read Lover's Knot: A Mysterious Pride & Prejudice Variation. It has all 5 star reviews and is available on KU.

