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Firehurler (Twinborn Chronicles Book 1)
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J.S. Morin (Goodreads Author)

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Rose is 98% done

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I’ve started skimming. Still too much telling and not enough showing for my tastes. It’s like they don’t have feelings. I find myself thinking “blah blah blah.”

— Jan 07, 2026 03:01PM Add a comment

Cait is 48% done

I am struggling to read this as a reader instead of a writer. The writing seems juvenile. I don’t mean it feels like a YA novel. It feels like a young, inexperienced writer. Everyone has to start somewhere, but I have read much better debuts. Lots of telling instead of showing.

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Cait is 48% done

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