Status Updates From Pin-up Girl

Using breast instead of plural breasts, unless she only has one. Then instead of than. Sigh, again with some editing this book would be great. Struggling though...

Love the plot and author, just once again needs some major editing. Frustrating. Grammar -- incorrect use of plural, tense you're (you are) instead of your and all the characters thrown at us as if we're supposed to know them. Went back and checked her other works to see if this was part of a series continuation. It's not.

Love the plot and author, just once again needs some major editing. Frustrating. Grammar -- incorrect use of plural, tense you're (you are) instead of your and all the characters thrown at us as if we're supposed to know them. Went back and checked her other works to see if this was part of a series continuation. It's not.