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Ratatosk
is on page 55 of 68
Love the plot and author, just once again needs some major editing. Frustrating. Grammar -- incorrect use of plural, tense you're (you are) instead of your and all the characters thrown at us as if we're supposed to know them. Went back and checked her other works to see if this was part of a series continuation. It's not.
— Jan 22, 2018 10:33AM
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Ratatosk
is 50% done
Using breast instead of plural breasts, unless she only has one. Then instead of than. Sigh, again with some editing this book would be great. Struggling though...
— Jan 22, 2018 10:35AM
Ratatosk
is on page 30 of 68
Love the plot and author, just once again needs some major editing. Frustrating. Grammar -- incorrect use of plural, tense you're (you are) instead of your and all the characters thrown at us as if we're supposed to know them. Went back and checked her other works to see if this was part of a series continuation. It's not.
— Jan 22, 2018 04:17AM
