Status Updates From In the Lawman's Protection ...

Ren called Natalie "Peaches". They've just named their puppy "Cream". Peaches and cream. Get it? Ugh? I just threw up a little bit in my mouth.

"I gave Natalie the tracker last night. We can follow her, but I've got to get to the safe house to get the computer with the program."

None of them have an app on their phone for this?

"You guys, we've got problems. This town isn't really equipped for the number of people we brought here with all the press, not to mention gawkers."

Er merr gerrd, you mean Omega's plan is dumb, doesn't make sense and was poorly thought out? Colour me shocked!

"He's always been obsessed with you. His attacks on Omega Sector, killing agents and their loved ones, was in direct retaliation to what he thought Omega SWAT did to you at that bank six years ago."

THEN WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU THINK SHE'S WORKING FOR HIM IF HE THINKS SHE'S DEAD?????????????

Why does Damien have to keep a low profile? We've been told for six books now that he's a master of disguise.

Ren doesn't want homeland security involved because she'd be treated like a hostile subject and that "it would be illegal to torture her but that didn't mean they couldn't make her incarcerated time extremely uncomfortable."

What, because it makes more sense to drug her, fake a train crash and force her to trek through the snow, not knowing where she's being taken?

Fuck this book.

But none of that gave Ren actionable intel. So he wasn't sure how to play this with her.

Well, it's more than you've had up until this point, Ren! Why is something you've seen with your own fucking eyes less reliable than the baseless assumptions you've currently been carrying?

You're a fucking, brain-dead loser.

Excuse my language. He is INFURIATING me.

Bloody hell, what is even the point with this whole crusade Ren has put in motion? Why not just drag to Omega Sector headquarters and fucking question her? It would be a lot less expensive and convoluted!

What an amazingly stupid book.

Ren calling Natalie "Peaches" all the time is also turning my stomach. I'm really hating on this book right now.

Was this some sort of weird phobia? Maybe just a reaction stress?

Hmm, Ren. Or possibly the fact YOU FUCKING DRUGGED HER YOU FUCKING PIECE OF SLIME!

Ren has DRUGGED our heroine and is now surprised that she might be reacting badly to it?

I'm just....I have no words. How could a woman write this???

Yep. He drugged her. What the actual fuck?

If Ren has drugged Natalie and faked the train crash, this is getting 1 star.

If he hadn't already known what she was capable of, he wouldn't have believed it.

Capable of what, Ren? Huh? Why is the super duper head of a super duper law enforcement agency so utterly convinced of Natalie's guilt without a single shred of evidence, and only assumptions to go on?

You really are a moronic ass.

Why is Ren assuming that Natalie is helping her ex-husband Damien? Considering he's a maniac and a terrorist, isn't it more likely she's been hiding from him for six years? Wouldn't most people make that leap of faith? Yes, they would, but this is land of Janie Crouch's Omega Sector, where everybody seems to behave as stupidly as possible!

235=key too

Key 2 motivations ....

Suspend disbelief 2 enjoy this tale!

Ren knows she’s been running 3 businesses
-color me confused-

This woman faked her own death .. seems 2 me that Omega is being pretty stupid. They couldn’t find out about her working ?
She hasn’t been on the radar for 6 yrs !