Status Updates From Cadence of Ciar (The Fate C...

Got to chapter 15, love the idea, characters and type of folklore this book touches on but… it’s so poorly edited and not very well written either unfortunately:/

I'm digging this book, I usually don't like reading stories from the point of non-humans but this girl's experiences made me feel included and able to have that new thing same as her.
Ciar is interesting, he is deadly and psychotic which is great. I can't wait to meet the other guys.

Ciar tenses beside me but otherwise doesn’t react. That beautiful face of his is relaxed, almost bored looking. His ankle is resting on his knee and his arms are crossed. The man is studying his fingernails like this is just another day while I’m sitting here so tense I can probably crack walnuts with my butt.

Uhh.. I.. Uhm.. Wut?

Either this was written by a Zoe impostor or she was extremely high when she thought this deserves to see the light of day as it is.

The worm is happy, I can feel it radiating from him. Who knew that it could be this easy to make his big blubby butt happy? Although, when he finally grows legs our method of travel will be less fun. I’ll no longer get to watch Ciar push a worm wearing clothes in a wheelchair carefully over holes in the sidewalk.

The worm's name is Fluffy btw 😂

Uhm.. Are we sure this was written by Zoe herself? Maybe it was a doppleganger? Cause this doesn't look like Zoe's work so far.. :/