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annob [on hiatus]
annob [on hiatus] is 56% done
The dialogue at this point is filled with so many "Oh.", "Oh?" and "Oh!" I had to count them. 20! (33 if I count all variations) And they are not uttered in a bedroom scenario. Speach clearly isn't this guy's strong suit...
— Apr 24, 2018 01:23PM Add a comment
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annob [on hiatus]
annob [on hiatus] is 26% done
Book, after a blurb with such steamy promises, you fade to black??
— Apr 24, 2018 07:08AM Add a comment
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