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J is 8% done
errori grammaticali frequenti
alcuni avvenimenti convenienti
inizialmente mi era piaciuto come stava venendo affrontata la molestia subita dalla protagonista, ma non mi piace che la protagonista abbia perdonato il tizio così velocemente e per di più era lei ad essere dispiaciuta perchè lui era "pentito". No!
Poi caitlin, una minore, che veste succinta per farsi notare dal prof (se ho capito bene)? No!
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Amanda
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Amanda
Amanda is on page 21 of 229
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kimberly_rose
kimberly_rose is 15% done
Wanted to like this, interesting premise, but way too juvenilely written to pass for a publishable novel—more like a talented junior high student writing. (As well, cringe-worthy grammar and spelling mistakes litter every page.) No rating.
Aug 23, 2019 07:35AM Add a comment
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