Status Updates From For the King

Oh, now come on! Such a great start. Him all stalkery over her for a year, she unaware of it & her innocent allure. Then she had to go and ruin & proclaim she already loved him. At least fight a little bit! The guys been watching u for a yr! Habe some self-esteem man! But I get it, it's just a short. Still, it was a strong beginign

The premise sounds like a good erotica but I wish there was more to it? It was VERY short. There wasn't a lot of characterization to begin with either. I wish we got to know more about the king and Willow. Why is he so obsessed with her? Is it only because of her looks? There has to be more than that. And why is Willow attracted to her ruthless king? What made him so compelling?