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Lillian Francis
is 8% done
I swear the Prelude and the main story were written by two different people.
The main story is awful. I'm throwing in the towel.
Dnf
— Mar 24, 2022 09:03AM
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The main story is awful. I'm throwing in the towel.
Dnf
Lillian Francis
is 7% done
If this was edited or even beta read I'll eat my hat. 🧢👒🎩
— Mar 24, 2022 08:50AM
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Lillian Francis
is 6% done
The Prelude was great. I was excited for what was to follow.
But so far the story proper is underwhelming. Unnecessary words, especially 'the young man' when we really should be in his pov litter the pages.
And conviently he just happened to be carrying a tent, emergency blanket etc.
— Mar 24, 2022 08:48AM
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But so far the story proper is underwhelming. Unnecessary words, especially 'the young man' when we really should be in his pov litter the pages.
And conviently he just happened to be carrying a tent, emergency blanket etc.
J
is 20% done
So far I really want to punch the MC in the throat. He's got no right to even have lived this long. He did 1 thing right at the beginning and then wound up in his situation. He then proceeds to be a panicky bitch making his life constantly more difficult. Then, he has a chance at an excellent ally without binding, and he becomes idiot turbo douche. Fucking dumb little bitch. Gah.
— Oct 11, 2021 08:29AM
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