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Lillian Francis
is 6% done
The Prelude was great. I was excited for what was to follow.
But so far the story proper is underwhelming. Unnecessary words, especially 'the young man' when we really should be in his pov litter the pages.
And conviently he just happened to be carrying a tent, emergency blanket etc.
— Mar 24, 2022 08:48AM
But so far the story proper is underwhelming. Unnecessary words, especially 'the young man' when we really should be in his pov litter the pages.
And conviently he just happened to be carrying a tent, emergency blanket etc.
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Lillian Francis
is 8% done
I swear the Prelude and the main story were written by two different people.
The main story is awful. I'm throwing in the towel.
Dnf
— Mar 24, 2022 09:03AM
The main story is awful. I'm throwing in the towel.
Dnf
Lillian Francis
is 7% done
If this was edited or even beta read I'll eat my hat. 🧢👒🎩
— Mar 24, 2022 08:50AM
