Status Updates From Dreadwing (Black Library No...

I'm really struggling with this one. Only being an eNovella doesn't help, but there's just so much discussion of plans, opposed to meaningful dialogue, and so much set up and logistics of action, rather than brief, efficient scenes.

This might be the first HH I would consider DNFing if I wasn't going for platinum.

So, I was reading this morning and I noticed they breeze over some pretty epic moments of what the fleet gets up to, and I thought reacting to one of them would make a good subject for a short story, and I spent the whole day writing for the first time in a long, long time!

So, yeah: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1t...

This is well written and orchestrated, but I'm a third in and it's just been wondering where the Lion is sulking and arguing about what to do. I'm getting flashbacks to the mode frustrating bits of The Path of Heaven.