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RatGrrrl
RatGrrrl is 66% done
I'm really struggling with this one. Only being an eNovella doesn't help, but there's just so much discussion of plans, opposed to meaningful dialogue, and so much set up and logistics of action, rather than brief, efficient scenes.

This might be the first HH I would consider DNFing if I wasn't going for platinum.
Apr 26, 2024 03:00PM
Dreadwing (Black Library Novella Series 1, #5)

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RatGrrrl
RatGrrrl is 43% done
So, I was reading this morning and I noticed they breeze over some pretty epic moments of what the fleet gets up to, and I thought reacting to one of them would make a good subject for a short story, and I spent the whole day writing for the first time in a long, long time!

So, yeah: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1t...
Apr 26, 2024 09:40AM
Dreadwing (Black Library Novella Series 1, #5)


RatGrrrl
RatGrrrl is 32% done
This is well written and orchestrated, but I'm a third in and it's just been wondering where the Lion is sulking and arguing about what to do. I'm getting flashbacks to the mode frustrating bits of The Path of Heaven.
Apr 25, 2024 06:50PM
Dreadwing (Black Library Novella Series 1, #5)


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