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Diego!
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“Wisdom does not choose sides. It simply is.” This chapter does a much better job of slowly showing the confusing changes in Joth’s psyche. Not only is he struggling to understand The People but he’s also comparing his old life and what he likes and dislikes. The last chapter wasn’t gradual at all, but this one was.
— Dec 29, 2025 04:11PM
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Diego!
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Chapter 6 feels like a hard dramatic switch in Joth’s moral perspective. The chapter begins us being told “he doesn’t see them as savage anymore”. I feel like this change needs to be a little more gradual and happen overtime. The audience is already in the know that the People aren’t savage or evil, but Joth doesn’t. It feels like a big leap that happens off screen through telling and not showing.
— Dec 29, 2025 01:17PM
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Diego!
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Going good so far! I wasn’t a big fan of the “1 month earlier” framing device, but I’m invested in both of our leads after chapter 3 so I’m excited to see where it goes!
— Dec 28, 2025 10:23PM
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Kris Rose Lothbrok
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Lord rhael ulmet is a total douche.
— Oct 30, 2024 08:41PM
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Kris Rose Lothbrok
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finally the main character has his mission
— Oct 21, 2024 03:52AM
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Kris Rose Lothbrok
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Starting this cause it was my turn from the library.
— Oct 10, 2024 09:01PM
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Really, really struggling to finish this. It’s not bad, exactly. I just don’t care at all what happens next.
— Oct 18, 2020 09:29AM
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