Status Updates From Pain of The Marquess (The V...

"So, Irene apparently looks like Frida Kahlo complete with the unibrow and flowers in the hair? Also, I swear the number of years since the men were released keeps going up and down across these books even though they occur in sequence, and there was clearly a screw up on who said what in chapter 16 when the wives are speaking to Irene."

Formatting is poor. Indents AND double (maybe triple) spaces between paragraphs. This is not only irritating but I half suspect it’s a ploy to add pages to the novel. As this is a KU novel, I’m not playing.