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Jonathan
Jonathan is 99% done
Just wrapping up the book now and posting my final thoughts before kindle automatically marks it as read. I dont like how Nicky's memory is fading, it makes sense since she left it all behind, but really it just drills in the fact that the monster won.
The books premise was interesting but unfortunately I feel its execution was week and the characters too unlikable.
I'm just glad the pacing sped up at the end!
Feb 05, 2022 12:12AM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 98% done
Not sure how I feel about the letter format "epilogue ".
At least its pretty clear the story isnt over... they moved the tree but the evil remains.
Feb 04, 2022 11:41PM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 83% done
Looks like I was right, the house was all part of the traders plan.
Feb 04, 2022 10:47PM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 75% done
The basement being scary paragraph.. I'm pretty sure the same paragraph was included earlier. Minor editing mistake or deliberate choice?
I'm definitely wondering if there is something special about the house itself.
Feb 04, 2022 10:13PM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 73% done
They found some teeth and bones. Seems like a bit of a coincidence.
I also find it interesting one if the people is called Fish.
And the trader has at least one open trade... the family members return.
This battle is definitely not over yet!
Feb 04, 2022 10:08PM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 68% done
I think the only likeable character is Nicky... She seems to be a very strong person.
And the amount of control the trader has is surprising. I can understand impacting memory, but he is influencing behavior too.
This also explains why the tree kept coming back even when people cut it down.
Feb 04, 2022 09:46PM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 65% done
The possibility that the trader has been isolating the family the entire time is intriguing. I definitely want to know what his end game is...
Feb 04, 2022 09:31PM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 55% done
Its interesting reading a book where the villain prevents you from remembering clearly.
I'm baffled how the parents didnt survive but Jim did... the only explanation is his debt is now paid in full.
I really dont like the time jumps and I find it hard to care about the characters.
Feb 04, 2022 08:32PM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 48% done
Haven't had much time to read lately. The attack on the trader was great but I doubt it will pay off... we aren't even halfway into the book yet.
Feb 03, 2022 12:18AM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 37% done
I really like the details around the traders. Theres a lot of good content in this story. My only issue is that some parts could be better presented.
Jan 23, 2022 12:29AM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 27% done
I'm not sure how I feel about the time jumps or telling the story a year at a time.
Jan 22, 2022 11:50PM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 26% done
I just wanted to say, this scenario is why you dont force unplanned sibling-watching on your older child without a good reason.
Jan 22, 2022 11:43PM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 20% done
Still a bit confusing, but its definitely building up my interest. I expect his mother said Trader instead of Traitor and his mishearing was simple plot device so he wouldn't realize what's going on.
Jan 21, 2022 10:57PM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 14% done
Yeah... I'm still confused... and now we have another time jump.
Jan 18, 2022 12:07AM Add a comment
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 4% done
Yeah... I'm confused.... The first chapter made sense... but chapter 2 seemed completely random...
Jan 17, 2022 10:57PM Add a comment
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