Status Updates From Honour, She Obeys: A Dark a...

TWICE now Mulan has been threatened with rape. Ok folks look - why? Just why. "Dark and twisted" doesn't need to mean this. Ok you wanna make Luwei awful, being a bully doesn't need to mean rapist. Mulan gets ambushed by some drunken jerks? DOES NOT HAVE TO MEAN RAPE. Ffs much more of this and I'm DNF'ing with extreme prejudice.

So far its ok, too original, but ok. But there's been at least two instances where I think the author or their editor made a comment that wasn't taken out/fixed. For instance "Ever since the day before, her muscles remained wound tighter than the rope (WHAT?)." <--fairly sure that was someone asking for the sentence to be ended since it makes no sense otherwise.