Status Updates From Lost Girl (Mafia Princess, ...

I found this book on a site for reverse harem books. And so far and there is nothing to even remotely suggest that this is a reverse harem. It's a threesome book. Between two women and one guy. And honestly that doesn't peak my interest at all. So far this book is an utter failure.

THE WORD IS QUIET..

how can this author make so many damned mistakes?!?!?!?

WOMEN!!! PLURAL!! OMFG.

Hmm why was this labeled RH?

Words that I have found so far...
Man vs men.
Woman vs women.
Then vs than.
Loosing vs losing.
And many more...
The second being correct.
Oh net vs next.
COME ON!

Not even into the book yet and already there are so many spelling errors. I have to wonder where these people find their editors. And the good editor should have been able to find that within seconds. Hell a bad editor should have been able to find them within 5 seconds.

It kinda went fownhill. Too much telling, not enough showing. I'll finish it but I won't read more in this series.

Exactly what I was wanting to read, short, fast paced with depth and angst. Perfect!

DNF 30% , unfortunately I couldn’t finish the book, it got too confusing and I just lost my interest. Also there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors. I think there is potential, I loved the storyline, but I got the impression that the author tried to fit everything (bad ass Girl/crew/mafia/ etc) in 170 pages / one book so it just didn’t work for me....