Status Updates From Voiceless (The Willowdale V...

Okay, "knees broke" still gets me, but at this point, I know exactly who I am reading when I read that. I won't forget the author. So now I am thinking they are kinda genius....

“Creator” is used over 25 times in this book. It is already annoying tf out of me.

So far this book is really disconnected and spiraling due to the writing being very repetitive.
We are only getting the thoughts inside the fmc’s head. I get it, she cannot speak. But that would have been a great opportunity for 3rd person. It would have made the story infinitely more interesting and palatable.

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