Status Updates From Unbelievable : Hell Raisers...

The story could be good, I don’t know yet. The writing style is distracting. There's a distinct lack of punctuation which impacts the flow.

I know it's a PNR book but the FMC believes she's human at the start and goes on and on about finally being legal at eighteen to go to a bar... in Texas...

It's very stilted and telling instead of showing. The formatting is bizarre and I'm on the fence about continuing.