Status Updates From Pyromancer

oh man this is just bad

OMG stop calling him "the kid"

"The hurdles they would have to jump in the future didn't stand a chance of bringing them down, if Tanner could laugh in the face of all he'd already heard."

"Every reason he had for refusing Tanner, for walking away and not taking advantage of his offer, washed away like ink from an eraser board."

"It wasn't until two pair of curious eyes turned in his direction that he remembered he was there under false pretenses and chances were good that Tanner would kick him right back out of the room."

The action of the boss villain doesn't seem realistic at all.