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Josh
is 9% done
The author has a d h d and you can't convince me otherwise.
The way he whiplashes from topic to topic and it's all done in exposition style.
To say it's amateur is a huge understatement. The pacing is laughably bad where in the space of two sentences, there'll be a dozen trips to the past in a time machine.But then he'll spend a few paragraphs describing another trip.Just to go see a movie.But it's not even clear
— Nov 05, 2025 02:29PM
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The way he whiplashes from topic to topic and it's all done in exposition style.
To say it's amateur is a huge understatement. The pacing is laughably bad where in the space of two sentences, there'll be a dozen trips to the past in a time machine.But then he'll spend a few paragraphs describing another trip.Just to go see a movie.But it's not even clear
Josh
is 7% done
Ehhh. Is this a self published book? It's written like it has very little direction from an experienced author or publisher...
Hope i'm giving it a shot.But there's definitely some issues with the characters and all this mandering thoughts... it's written like a stream of conscious story.
— Nov 05, 2025 02:12PM
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Hope i'm giving it a shot.But there's definitely some issues with the characters and all this mandering thoughts... it's written like a stream of conscious story.
Susan McReynolds
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No, no no. A cell phone and a drone would not work millions of years ago to video dinosaurs. Doesn’t wireless technology rely on satellites orbiting our earth? Without those satellites, the two devices would not be able to communicate.
— Nov 23, 2024 01:55PM
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